Nazam No.1

Corruption Rate

Har kaam mai sabqat chahta hai

Or naam  bara kamata hai

Tu apnay kalay dhandon ko

Insaaf ki bhaint charhata hai

Mat bhool puranay waqt ko tu

Jab tu bhi adna naukar tha

Insaaf ki batain karta tha

or sach kehnay say darta tha

Haq k sailab pai jab teray

kala paisa parta tha

Jab chand paison ki khatir tu

Emaan ka sauda karta tha

Or lalach kay is jungle mai

Tu kai kai meel ko chalta tha

Ab takhta tera ulat gaya

Or hath bhi tera khali hai

Aik baat samajh lai aye nadan

Dunya ki ulfat theek sahi

Per rizq tera halali ho

Emaan ki taqat chor kay jo

In dhandon mai parjata hai

Aik roz bari ruswae say

wo apni jaan ganwata hai

—–******—–

SaRa Tirmizi

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  1. nice,,,,,,

      • fatima
      • July 13th, 2010

      hey sara gr8 yaar tm to bari chuparustam nikli mindblowing mashallah tmhai to poetess bun na chaheyea :D :)

    • lumah hassan
    • July 13th, 2010

    well done sara keep it up best of luck…..

    • Asad Zaidi
    • July 13th, 2010

    paisa paisa paisa paisa…………………………..!!!

    Police hmri paisa paisa karti hai is paisay pe ye marti hai…………….

    ek bat mjhe smjh nhe ati hai ye apni jebay kyo bharti hani…………

    kiya hota hai paise ki ye paisay ki laga dain dheri…………….

    ye haram khor hain , barish kardien paise ki……..!!!

    PAKISTANI POLICE SUCK…………….!!!! HARAMKHOR POLICE………..!!!

  2. wao yaar…………………………!gra8 zabrdast poem hai…….

    • afroz alvi
    • July 14th, 2010

    hey sara its really nice ……\
    do u want to became a author its nice it will help u n the poem was too gud have a nice new name of police

    • thanks for your comments ..
      well its for passion .. but as a profession i want to become computer programmer

    • Faisal
    • July 14th, 2010

    great poem…..

    but its not a matter of only Pakistani peoples its the matter of all “human beings”….any way great effort……and make ur pen running to write such things

    • Thanks.
      you are right at your side but being a Pakistan we should over come our faults as a nation. Whether its happening in other countries or not but we have to see first that what is actually happening here.

    • sahar saba
    • July 14th, 2010

    greatest saRa…. mindblowing

    • Arifa Batool
    • July 14th, 2010

    Nice Amazingly true! keep writing! weldone and very well written!

    • Faisal
    • July 14th, 2010

    OK if u write it as considering Pakistan then it’ll benefit us…but there r so many poems like it…..no one can implement on it….thats our problem

    • yeah thats the key point..
      just think once and try to find out what is the root issue of all these kinds of situation.

  3. Asalam o Alekum

    very nice poem

    • tahreem shah
    • July 14th, 2010

    wow.. sara very nice poem..

    • tahreem shah
    • July 14th, 2010

    wow.. sara very nice poem…

    • tahreem shah
    • July 14th, 2010

    hmmm….nice poem

  4. it is such a nice poem sara very nice.

    • nadeem raza
    • July 16th, 2010

    very inqalabi poem ha it is change

  5. Acha likha hai .. khaas tor pay rhyming bht achi hai …
    kch jaga pay qafiey nay sath chhor dia
    but ant way
    bht hi alla effort

    GOOD WORK BACHAY :D

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